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LiminalDoctorLiminalDoctor 19 Mar 2024 11:37
in discussion Meta / Per page discussions » Dog House

Lacking how? If its something about how descriptive it is, I can change. But if its about it not being clinical or formal enough, that's intentionally done to give the impression of an amateur who thinks they have a shot at discovering something big. But let me know either way and I can make some changes. These kinds of things with characterisation are way harder to get across in such short space but I have an idea of how I can change for either point.

Re: -1 by LiminalDoctorLiminalDoctor, 19 Mar 2024 11:37

I want to ask a question. How do yo know the pictures is generated by AI?

Re: waiting for greenlight by ky xiaoluoky xiaoluo, 19 Mar 2024 10:50

My mother tongue isn't English. I can only say some simple sentences.

Re: waiting for greenlight by ky xiaoluoky xiaoluo, 19 Mar 2024 10:45

Quite a unique idea! I had never imagined Level 909 would have a sublevel lol. Whilst the level itself is cool and has potential, I think a few people will find it weird that this is a Level 909 sublevel. Nonetheless, with some crit this article can reach something! One thing you should note though is that we do not allow AI-generated images anymore, so you should replace those. More information is on https://en.backrooms-wiki.ru/image-use-policy


- Univ

He is me fr


- Univ

Not bad for a first level! It can be really good with some grammar and concept critique from a greenlighter. The images are nice, but I believe Adobe stock images are not usable since they're copyrighted unless you buy them! You should refer to the https://en.backrooms-wiki.ru/image-use-policy and only use images licensed as this. You can find some here maybe: https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=pagoda&title=Special:MediaSearch&go=Go&type=image


- Univ

https://sandbox-2.en.backrooms-wiki.ru/dedale

do not hesitate to tell me what you think in the comments

New Level! Level 316 by DedaleDedale, 19 Mar 2024 07:37
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VaixenVaixen 19 Mar 2024 07:09
in discussion Meta / Per page discussions » Level 1.3 - Malignance

You can practically smell the overwhelming odor of rotten flesh and pure evilness on this.

The 180º spin on the original concept is very nice; what was once pure now being decomposed by putrid malevolence. The subtle hints between each demise, the representation of an inexorable, ruthless death and how it smashes hope (the Detox Zones becoming the origin of Decay) the warped anatomy of the decaying form, the disturbing autopsy reports… yeah, it all makes for a tight-knit article. Great job

+1 by VaixenVaixen, 19 Mar 2024 07:09

:333

Re: :3 by DivineAtlasDivineAtlas, 19 Mar 2024 04:40

:3 +1

:3 by BlueSignetBlueSignet, 19 Mar 2024 04:25
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SecondtoInfinitySecondtoInfinity 19 Mar 2024 02:33
in discussion Meta / Per page discussions » Dog House

The initial clinical tone introduction in this article is quite lacking, which is a major shame because the following text is very good—very good, some of the best on the site.


Goodness, wikidot has a weird account system. What's this weird forum signature thi

-1 by SecondtoInfinitySecondtoInfinity, 19 Mar 2024 02:33

Getting downvotes is sad, but you left a comment including the reason why you downvote this article, which gives me some help.
Thank you to read!

Re: -1,Sorry by aster_argyleaster_argyle, 19 Mar 2024 01:32

You are fabulous, thank you so much for your crit and support. Seriously, it means so much coming from you.

Re: +1 +1 +1 +1 by DivineAtlasDivineAtlas, 18 Mar 2024 23:56

I completely fell in love with the Canon writing for it, look forward to more!

Re: +1 by DivineAtlasDivineAtlas, 18 Mar 2024 23:55

Super glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading my works.

Re: +1 pal! by DivineAtlasDivineAtlas, 18 Mar 2024 23:55

I appreciate you so much, Derrick.

I was in such a hurry. I just thought of the basic framework and wrote down the rest of it in a hurry.
I definitely needed to take a deeper and more careful look at this, so I think I may need to rewrite this later.
But, This is the first time I've received such a long text.
Thank you, Praetor! I will develop this.

It'd be great, but I don't think I can pull it off. Though, if anyone else wants to try, you have my blessing, whatever that counts for.


- Snom, Backrooms Wiki Site Admin

Re: +200??? by SnomWritingSnomWriting, 18 Mar 2024 22:54
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