Lacking how? If its something about how descriptive it is, I can change. But if its about it not being clinical or formal enough, that's intentionally done to give the impression of an amateur who thinks they have a shot at discovering something big. But let me know either way and I can make some changes. These kinds of things with characterisation are way harder to get across in such short space but I have an idea of how I can change for either point.
in discussion Writing Help / Help: Draft Critique » waiting for greenlight
I want to ask a question. How do yo know the pictures is generated by AI?
in discussion Writing Help / Help: Draft Critique » waiting for greenlight
My mother tongue isn't English. I can only say some simple sentences.
in discussion Writing Help / Help: Draft Critique » waiting for greenlight
Quite a unique idea! I had never imagined Level 909 would have a sublevel lol. Whilst the level itself is cool and has potential, I think a few people will find it weird that this is a Level 909 sublevel. Nonetheless, with some crit this article can reach something! One thing you should note though is that we do not allow AI-generated images anymore, so you should replace those. More information is on https://en.backrooms-wiki.ru/image-use-policy
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in discussion Meta / Per page discussions » Level 388 - "The Harvest Project"
Thank you so much!
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in discussion Writing Help / Help: Ideas Critique » New Level! Level 316
Not bad for a first level! It can be really good with some grammar and concept critique from a greenlighter. The images are nice, but I believe Adobe stock images are not usable since they're copyrighted unless you buy them! You should refer to the https://en.backrooms-wiki.ru/image-use-policy and only use images licensed as this. You can find some here maybe: https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=pagoda&title=Special:MediaSearch&go=Go&type=image
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You can practically smell the overwhelming odor of rotten flesh and pure evilness on this.
The 180º spin on the original concept is very nice; what was once pure now being decomposed by putrid malevolence. The subtle hints between each demise, the representation of an inexorable, ruthless death and how it smashes hope (the Detox Zones becoming the origin of Decay) the warped anatomy of the decaying form, the disturbing autopsy reports… yeah, it all makes for a tight-knit article. Great job
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The initial clinical tone introduction in this article is quite lacking, which is a major shame because the following text is very good—very good, some of the best on the site.
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in discussion Meta / Per page discussions » Level 705 - A Tale of Two Islands
Getting downvotes is sad, but you left a comment including the reason why you downvote this article, which gives me some help.
Thank you to read!
You are fabulous, thank you so much for your crit and support. Seriously, it means so much coming from you.
I completely fell in love with the Canon writing for it, look forward to more!
Super glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading my works.
I appreciate you so much, Derrick.
in discussion Meta / Per page discussions » Level 705 - A Tale of Two Islands
Compliments make me feel happy!
Thank you to read
in discussion Meta / Per page discussions » Level 705 - A Tale of Two Islands
I was in such a hurry. I just thought of the basic framework and wrote down the rest of it in a hurry.
I definitely needed to take a deeper and more careful look at this, so I think I may need to rewrite this later.
But, This is the first time I've received such a long text.
Thank you, Praetor! I will develop this.
It'd be great, but I don't think I can pull it off. Though, if anyone else wants to try, you have my blessing, whatever that counts for.
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